Maung Maung 200 word challange
On a cloudy day I climbed the big dawn wall because I want to be the first free climber to climb the dawn wall in Yosemite national park with my friend. I called my friend Kevin Jorgeson to come with me to climb the dawn wall with me. I told Kevin to pick me up in his truck so he did, then we drove to Yosemite national park. When we arrived we got out gear and started to climb the dawn wall with only 1 rope tied to my foot. I kept climbing but I had to get food so food got delivered to me so Kevin and I built a tent high in the sky. We sat down and ate the food and we slept for a long time until it was morning again. We woke up and continued to climb the dawn wall but the dawn wall wasn’t straight so it was difficult for me to climb the dawn wall. It became dark again so Kevin and I built a big white tent and we fell asleep in the tent. When we woke up we ate some food. After 17 more days we finally got to the top.
Maung Maung 200 word challange
200 Word Challenge
The 200 Word Challenge is an opportunity to practice writing using just the right words. 200 Words might sound like a lot, but once you get going you’ll find yourself crossing that line easily, so be careful to only say what you NEED to.
(This whole thing is over 100 words already)
For Week One your challenge is to write a 200 word recount of a time you…
Tasted the best food you’ve ever tasted.
| Remember! This week we have been learning about chronological order. Make sure you get the sequence of events in the right order. |
| Once on a cloudy night my mother let me and my sister go to a place called Xiolongkan Chinese Hot Pot. When we arrived we ordered raw beef and uncooked noodles and a spicy hotpot and when I first saw the food on the table I got hungry. First I grabbed a piece of raw beef with chopsticks and kept it in the hotpot for ten seconds. Then I put it in a tiny bowl and ate it quickly because it was delicious. Then my mum put the uncooked noodles into the hotpot bowl and when it finished I grabbed a lot and I ate it really fast. When the food was nearly gone we ordered a lot more food because it was too delicious and we were barely full. We ordered more beef because it was my favourite meat and ate most of it and only left a little for my family. My sister’s favourite was the noodles because she loves noodles and my mothers favourite was the vegetable. Then we got full and we paid and we stood up and walked to the exit and we got back into our car and I was really exhausted from eating. |