My time in the water recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
> 2 years ago I went to this waterpark called Splash Planet with my cousin and my family. It took 3 hours to get there, once we got there we had to wait in line for 20 minutes. When we got in I ran into the river that goes around the whole water park but it was so cold, After that I went to the hot pools that was so warm
And then I went to the go kart and nearly crashed but I didn’t. When we finished go kart we went to this aquarium that had a penguin and the penguin slid down the ice into water. Then we went to another room that had a big turtle and some fishes and also a stingray. Then we went to my cousin’s house and we played on the trampoline and then we went back home. This was a wonderful and I wished I could do it again.